refinement

Taken in the feedback that i got sent from my peers about the two cans the one all black and the other one with the yellow green type. They quite like the idea of adding some other element with the colouring instead of the type to neutralise everything should not put anything ahead of the others in terms of hierarchy within it . Have therefore made these quite uncomfortable shapes randomly in illustrator Cos i did a study last year about what people felt about shapes and apparently angular shapes makes people uncomfortable. This way I can also draw the attention to the drink responsibly as that is the top part of it and I would be drawn to that. With this colour combination it makes it quite uncomfortable feeling a bit with a red from the warning label and it also doesn't make them stick out more than the others I think this might be the best way about it I was worked with spacing it in order to space out the type right and fit everything in and most brands would be able to fit there ingredients and name and flavour at the bottom there so it shouldn't be an issue for an overall rebrand of standardised packaging. This design is not a traditionally sound design as it's not meant to reference the past really. And it's still not that modern and clean that would be high tech and if every shelf was filled with these types of cans I think it be working. Since there's no way to implement a government ban on how alcohol is portrayed in the store . As I always reference Norway but back here all the alcohol gets hidden at 8 in the food shops and you're not allowed to buy it after that and also in the specialist shop being the vinmonopolet they close at three And I feel like just reducing the time or the overall appeal of alcohol shelves would reduce consumption of it coz he wouldn't be drawn to it, personally i get drawn to nice design and I know a lot of people that aren't graphic design interested people also do without thinking of it as i did my survey earlier on about what people thought of prize compared to design most people thought that this wonky is clean his designs were the most expensive and more desirable.