crit

try to create more movement in the busier poster
off the axis
to does not snake as much
needs a bit more space
more energy
try to fill the solid glyphs with film scenes
check out "seven" intro
add texture
play with it more

I tried to make them more readable with keeping the order of the words in the right order that helped a lot. In order to make that happen the other layout had to change the other layout too in order to fit the design in.

to incorporate the snapshots from films that are shown at the festival creates a lighter feel over the poster. it works to showcase the films and also appeal to the audience that is younger creatives in Leeds. 

in order to create movement in the postmodernist approach, I have worked with creating more movement in the poster. i have attempted to make the design off the axis the first attempt is ok but the other two attempts to make movement looks ay more childish.